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The First Time I Saw Her... by MossySparkle The First Time I Saw Her... by MossySparkle
"I first time I saw her, I knew it was love. My heart pounded. My eyes couldn't look away. And I'll love her forever."

~Glacier

Here's Some Info About Glacier If You Are Confused

Glacier is one of my fursonas that I honestly forgot about! ^^;
His bio is here: [link]
As you can see, his name used to be Icy, and his design is way different than the picture. Yeah, well, I changed this design. Plus his name. Icy is such a common name...besides, I like the name Glacier.
I created him a long time ago for Misty. I felt that my first fursona Misty needed someone to help her...someone to be at her side. And Glacier was just the cat/wolf I came up with.
Their anniversary isn't too long away! C:
So basically this picture is about when he first saw Misty...and he knew it was love.

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Please critique?
:iconbiirdi:
Well done mossy!
first ill start with the pros ;)
i love how you put the chest fur on misty this time, much better!
also the facial expression on misty is also cute c:
the blue and white one looks adoreable and you didnt make her huge, witch brings on the impact more, making it look a bit more 3d


Now for the cons 3:
Try and put fur on the blue and white cats chest, so the legs connect better and more natural looking.
also on misty be sure to put fur where the legs connect, i love how you put fur on the chest though, its a good step.
also for the wings on the blue one, try and make it more smooth and less fabric-y looking, it brings on a much better impact and makes the character look better c:

Next steps.

I havnt even done this but try and put fur on the back on mistys neck, just a bit of squiggle that looks like fur. im just learning how to do that so i have really no good adive on that one, try and look at more experienced drawers

also for the wings i would recemend you look at rainbow dash or fluttershy and study a bit of wing anotamy to make the wings looks more perfecinal. this i did with my drawings and it worked wonders.

also, try and do some shadeing on the actually cats, all you have to do is make a layer on top of the colour layer and pick black and go over the placed you want shaded, and then make it more transperent to you liking

c: Good luck and keep up the good work!
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:iconazuriite:
OK. Let's start with the top cat.
And Ill form my critiques more easily so its more symmetrical :D
Head: Nice, Its pretty nicely shaped, and the ears don't look like potato chips ^^ WEWT The nose is still too big :T Good job getting the mouth smaller. The eyes...are a bit too squically...like this ~.

Body: Nice except the hind legs look AWKWARD D8. They look like golf clubs. When a cat sits down their feet are either infrount of the middle of the leg, not to the side, thats not the way their antonym works = /. The tail looks to skinny ;n; And I wont talk about the wings because I have no clue xD

OK NEXT KITTY
Head: Boot-i-ful, a bit too large. One of the ears is crooked >:C -spazzes- Your ears need to be curved and straight if that makes anysense. Look at mine or Neon's for an example owo
The nose is good, along with the mouth. Like I said before the eyes could be straighter...

Body: I cant see much of it...so. Yeah. It looks good from my angle xD
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Biirdi Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwww so cute
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MossySparkle Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the critique ^^
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Biirdi Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no troblem ;)
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